first draft finished

Today we finished our first draft for our music video; there are a few things that we may need to change in order to get it to the high standard that we want. Our mise-en-scene, as the bedroom we have used is out of date and isn’t stereotypical of the young couple in our video. We also need to look at our performance parts throughout the video aren’t dynamic enough therefore, we need to add more dynamic shot variations and maybe add some coloured lights and smoke to liven up the performance.